Name______________________
Date_______________________
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Expository
Essay Revision Sheet
1.
Interjection used: _______________________
2. Three adjectives:________________________ Three adverbs: ____________________________
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3.
Sentence length:
One sentence 20+ words:
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One sentence of three
words:
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4.
First word of the first 20 sentences:
(don’t count “the,” “a,” or “an.”)
1. _______________ 6. _______________ 11. _______________ 16. _______________
2. _______________ 7. _______________ 12. _______________ 17. _______________
3. _______________ 8. _______________ 13. _______________ 18. _______________
4. _______________ 9. _______________ 14.
_______________ 19.
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5. _______________ 10. _______________ 15. _______________ 20. _______________
5. Essay Check List:
3. _____ Eliminate
the pronoun “you,” especially as a subject of a sentence.
4. _____ Spell check
5. _____ Partner proof read