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English 9
Essay #4 – Literary Analysis
of The Miracle Worker.
Write
an expository essay based on one of the following ideas. You are not simply
summarizing the story; rather, you are making a statement ABOUT the story, and
then finding facts to prove the statement.
Pick one of the following
theses to discuss in this essay:
1. Communication is vital to
any relationship.
2. Language is the doorway to
the mind.
3. Spoiling a person is
harmful to that person.
4. Teaching people how to do
things themselves is far better than doing for them.
5. People should not close
their hearts to love.
6. Never give up hope.
7. The Miracle Worker
is filled with conflict.
Or use the following ideas in
a discussion of the story:
1. What might be a motto that
expresses Annie’s philosophy of life?
2. Choose a quote from the
play that you find meaningful. Explain its importance in the play and to
yourself.
_____ Ideas and Development
20
___ minimum of 300
words.
___ abundant details describing the event being
shared.
___ good judgment in choice of details.
___ includes
thoughts and/or reflections about the impact the event had or has on you.
_____ Organization
20
___ appropriate title
___ introduction: use engaging lead, explain the lead, short
summary of the story, include the thesis (underline the thesis).
___ paragraphing helped the reader.
___ state each point you are making.
___ explain in detail the point.
___ elaborate about the point with a specific
example. Use quotes from the book to prove the point you are making.
___ commentary on each
point made.
___ effective
transitions both within and between paragraphs.
___ clear conclusion that restates the thesis and main points.
___ make a text-to-text, text-to-self, or
text-to-world comparison
___ hook
back to the lead.
_____ Sentence Fluency, Voice, and Word Choice
5
___ sentences flow and
read smoothly.
___
variety
in sentence length, structure, and first words.
___2A: include a three-word sentence. (highlight this)
___2B: include a twenty-word sentence.
(highlight this)
___ vivid word choice
that helps show the reader ideas. (Underline
at least five vivid words or phrases)
_____ Conventions
5
___ typed
essay, double-spaced, one inch margins, 12pt standard
font.
___
proper
spelling, punctuation, and usage.
___
complete,
proper sentences. (No fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.)
_____ Total
50