English 10 Practice on Thesis Statement writing
Thesis statements are concise
statements that give direction to a paper. A reader should clearly understand
the main idea of an essay without reading anything else – the prompt, the
beginning, etc.
Thesis statements should be
an opinion. They should be arguable. (should have two
definite sides to the topic.)
A successful thesis sentence
must also be a correct sentence. Sentence fragments and run-on sentences are
incorrect, even if they express a thesis.
Directions:
Your paragraph should have four parts:
1. state your reason in support of the thesis statement.
2. explain the reason fully.
3. elaborate by telling a story, giving an example, using a quote from the book.
(if using a quote, explain what the quote means.)
4. commentary
1. The novel has a very
strong emphasis on animals – mice, rabbits, dogs, etc. In fact, there is an
importance and function of animals in relation to Lennie.
Take note of how he is described in chapter 1 when he drinks from the river (p.
3). Note how he responds to George and how George interacts with him
throughout. Some people believe Lennie to be little
more than an animal himself; while others disagree with this opinion. Take a
side on this and write a thesis statement that gives direction to an essay.
2. Candy’s dog is important
in relation to the understanding of the novel as a whole. Consider the
condition of the dog, what occurs in the scene, how everyone reacts, and how it
relates to the situation of the humans. Sometimes people argue about this. Some
believe we should put animals out of their misery when they are old. Some
disagree since we really can’t determine the degree of an animal’s feelings.
Take a position and express it with a strong thesis statement.
3. Loneliness is one of the
central themes in the novel. Virtually every character suffers from it. Write a
thesis statement telling which character is the worst off one because of
loneliness.
4. Tragedy has been defined
as the fall of an essentially good person due to a flaw or limitation within
their personality. Does the novel’s outcome result from the individual’s flaws,
or is it society conspires against the individuals? If George is the main
character in this novel, how does he fit the definition of a tragic hero? Write
a thesis statement taking a position on this.
5. Some people are shocked at
the end of the novel. Some see the end as a natural consequence of actions. Take
into consideration Slim’s comments at the end, as
well as Slim and Candy’s comments in chapter 3 regarding Candy’s dog. Write a
thesis statement that takes a strong stand about the George’s decision at the
end of the novel.