AMERICAN STUDIES                   Modern vs. Tradition/The Modern World

                                                            In-Class Essay – Reflective Essay

 

                                                                                                Name __________________

 

____  Ideas and Development

25                                      __  You wrote approximately 400-500 words on the assigned topic

__  Clear, concise thesis statement on the topic of  technology being a double-edged

                sword (underline your thesis statement)

__  Strong elaboration, using supporting details, facts, and examples as evidence of

                the good of technology

__  Strong elaboration, using supporting details, facts, and examples as evidence of

                the bad of technology

__  Intelligent choice of issues covered within your discussion

__  Supporting details come from American history, American literature, and personal

                experience

__  Clear focus on the given topic

 

 

____  Organization

10                                      __  Clear, attention-getting introduction

__  Logical paragraphing to help your reader (one topic per paragraph)

__  Excellent detail in body paragraphs

__  Clear, effective transitions

__  Conclusion that gives a sense of closure and does not merely repeat the introduction

 

 

____  Sentence Fluency, Voice, and Word Choice

5                                        __  Sentences flow smoothly and are not mind-numbingly repetitious in structure

__  Vivid word choice kept your reader from going into a coma

 

 

____  Conventions

10                                      __  Neat and legible (in ink)

__  Spelling, punctuation, and usage are impressively strong

__  Your sentences are complete, not fragments, run-ons, or comma splices

 

 

____  Total Score

  50